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Real name: helena
Member Since: 21/01/08
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Paper Trail by Keikokin (PG) star star star star star [ - ]
Blair leaves clues for his lovable but thick-headed Sentinel.

Categories: Jim/Blair
Characters:
Genres: Established Relationship
Warnings: Fluff

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1782 - Hits: 2847
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/01/06 - Last Updated: 02/01/06
Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 18/08/10 (Chapter 1: one shot)

We definitely need a wedding and party sequel please.

Author's Response:

What exactly would you like to see in a possible sequel Kiwigirl?

 

-Keikokin 

Feeling Our Way by Keikokin, Nefernat (NC-17) star star star star star [ - ]
This is the conclusion to "And Charlie Listened" by Nefernat and Keikokin. Daniel finds himself 'inheriting' children and has to find out how to juggle them and Jack into his life.

Categories: Jack/Daniel
Characters: None
Genres: First Time
Warnings: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 70031 - Hits: 2180
Complete?: Yes - Published: 02/01/06 - Last Updated: 03/01/06
Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 20/12/08 (Chapter 21: 21)

I have totally fallen in love with this story. Its a beautiful heart warming story, full of love and laughter and also with some sadness as well, i cried through chpts 17 and 18.I love this little family, i would love to read more stories about this wonderful family.Keep up the great work. Helena

Author's Response: Thank  you kiwigirl. PLEASE email me with what you'd like to see in a sequel. The coauthor and I have often talked about adding to it but frankly are at a loss of what it should include! Keikokin@gmail.com Thank you Helena/kiwigirl

Voldemort is dead but things are still not what they should be.

Categories: Harry/Lucius
Characters:
Genres: First Time
Warnings: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 6368 - Hits: 4361
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/01/06 - Last Updated: 03/01/06
Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 18/08/10 (Chapter 1: one shot)

Love this story as always. Who is Dracos lover?

Author's Response:

I'd rather leave that one up to the imagination of reader ;) Thanks so much and keep on reading! 

-Keikokin 

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 26/02/08 (Chapter 1: one shot)

i finally found this story again i've been looking for ages the problem is i read so many harry/lucius stories i lose track of where i read them.i need to be more organised and write down where i read them.excellent as always.more please i love where harry goes running down the hallway followed by screams from sirius and remus.and lucius scoops him up on his horse with him.love it.

Author's Response: awww thank you so very much for your kind words and for searching for one of my fics. I'm grateful that you did. Thanks too for the detailed review

A pre-slash piece. Narcissa broke her marriage contract with Lucius. So he collects his new bride, the heir of the Black family. Re-edit done on formatting feb. 2015



Categories: Harry/Lucius
Characters: None
Genres: First Time
Warnings: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 15599 - Hits: 7144
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/01/06 - Last Updated: 03/01/06
Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 10/07/10 (Chapter 1: Omega)

I love it, such a sweet ending. The only problem i have reading your H/L stories is which one to read first as i love them all.

Author's Response: Thanks Kiwigirl, my one daughter has the same issue so your definately not alone but I am glad that you love them all.

After a New Years Party, Harry finds out he brought home more than a hangover.

Categories: Harry/Lucius
Characters:
Genres: Mpreg
Warnings: Alternate Universe

Series: None
Chapters: 38
Wordcount: 46243 - Hits: 46184
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/01/06 - Last Updated: 04/01/06
Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 3: 3)

Ok now while i understand dracos uncles feelings.I think that they went to far draco is their nephew and lucius son ofcourse hes feeling angry and betrayed not to mention feeling his place in his fathers life is being threatened by harry giving lucius a child.His uncles were very quick to make it known they would take harrys side against him.Maybe they should show him some love and understanding and not threaten draco.Bloody uncles need to grow up.If they were so concerned about draco not being good enough to be a malfoy they should have been better uncles.Who would ever have thought i'd be defending draco.I would love you to do a sequel with draco ending up with severus.Their hot together.

Author's Response: really? wasn't this story long enough? (stunned) I can't say I've ever done a Draco/Severus only fic. I've had family come down on me and that's where it comes from, real life experience = just sisters instead

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 4: 4)

well that made me cry/Smug bloody uncles.they need to take a good look at themselves first before criticising draco.

Author's Response: they meant well, harsh yes, but they did mean well

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 5: 5)

makes me wonder if the uncles feelings about dracos mother has made them transfer their feelings to the way they treat draco.

Author's Response: huh good point can't say I ever thought about it

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 13: 13)

oh gawd talk about a hissy fit haha.you definitely need to get draco with severus they can discover love together.

Author's Response: um okay I'm so guilty of the hissy fits myself. my bad

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 14: 14)

love the cravings brings back memories

Author's Response: Harry got those because wow did I ever x 3

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 16: 16)

well definitely different reactions from everyone thats for sure.snape very bad needs taking in hand.should have sent the uncles.remus has passed out and weasleys being sick.haha

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are so into this one!

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 17: 17)

SWEET

Author's Response: THANKS

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 20: 20)

yay go lucius

Author's Response: woo hoo Lucius

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 22: 22)

brilliant

Author's Response: thank you kiwigirl

Reviewer: kiwigirl - Signed
Date: 31/01/08 (Chapter 26: 26)

ooh thats not nice severus let draco at him.

Author's Response: bad severus bad