Date: 08/04/08 - 05:41 am (27)
this was wonderful! is there a sequal?
Author's Response: should there be one? What should it cover? what would you like to see in it? keikokin@gmail.com
Date: 31/03/08 - 05:55 pm (27)
Is that it? Update...sequel...?
Great Job
Author's Response: IF I were to do a sequel to Holding On what would you like to see in it? keikokin@gmail.com and THANKS!!
Date: 28/03/08 - 01:43 pm (8)
Hi
I have not yet finished to read your story, but I can already tell you that I like it very much.
I usually prefer a reckless, dangerous,dominant Lucius who would do anything (bribe, threaten and more) to gain power and stature AND to prorect his mate and make him happy. I am very well aware that in your storie Lucius is indeed very protective Of Harry. But he is a little too sweet for me.
On the other hand your story is really well written, well paced and the characters are well thougth and consistent. So, all in all I really enjoy your story and I will come back to it as soon as I can.
hugs
maloanne
Author's Response: I must admit I favor Disney endings and bad boys with a sweet side. I am thrilled with the review though. My beta must take the credit for helping the pace and characterization and consistency.
Date: 23/02/08 - 08:07 pm (27)
this is perfect - absolutely perfect. so much feelings and that they had to work on their relationship ... i like this a lot, one of the best i have read til yet from you :) *hugs*
bye, Blackie ^^..
Author's Response: Hiya Blackie. I'm really glad that you liked this one. Honestly, I think its one of my better ones. My beta and I certainly worked on it a long time. Glad it shows! *grins* ((hugs))
Date: 24/06/07 - 02:42 am (5)
I definitely like Submissive Lucius.
Author's Response: oh guh me too *drools*
Date: 24/06/07 - 02:23 am (4)
I just started reading chapter 4 when i realized that they could have found his mate sooner if they only asked Hermione (hey i think i spelled that right) who the man was who called her for dinner. They didn't have to narrow it down. But of course what would be the fun in that.
Author's Response: none, and far too logical for the way my brain works in its devious paths
Date: 24/06/07 - 02:19 am (3)
Okay, I know this is mean but I like getting back at Snape for the way he's treated Harry in the past and present. Nothing that would harm him or kill him.
Author's Response: I'm not a big Snape person myself.
Date: 24/06/07 - 02:08 am (2)
Wow. Isn't Harry taking the Savior-of-the-Wizarding-World a little bit too far.
Author's Response: hahahh too true!
Date: 24/06/07 - 02:02 am (1)
You have no idea how excited I am at finding this story. Lucius/Harry & Itachi/Naruto are my most favorite couple. Unfortunately they are the hardest to find. So thank you.
Author's Response: You are quite welcome. Thank you for reading my little stories!
Date: 17/02/07 - 10:40 am (27)
I sat here and read every chapter of this story. It was just so captivating. I've read some of your works on other sites and was so happy to know that you have your own with all of your works. This was such a good story. I am more that likely going to spend the next couple of weeks on this site just reading. You are a wonderful author!
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you for your faith!
Date: 21/03/06 - 07:05 am (27)
Hey there! Finally got around to reviewing, even though it's like the third time I've read it. Oh my, I would really like to know what happens with them after that last scene. Whether or not they have children, where they travel to, if Seamus and Draco stay together. You should write a sequel, love. You know how to contact me, lol. Talk to you later!
Author's Response: At the present time I'm not planning on writing a sequel. I have thought several times, however, of writing side stories to it. I'm sure you'll notice when I do.
Date: 17/02/06 - 07:10 am (27)
Hey I first read a fic of ur on AFF.net and found that i really like the pairring of LMxHP and wanted to see if u had written mor..well then i found ur site and was over joyed that u had written sooooo many..Any i REALLY LOVE this fic..it is my fav of all of the one i have read so far..it has taken me a lone to read all of the chaps. but in the process, every day i couldnot wait to come home from school and read the fic..Then when i get board in class or something like that i my brain just drifts and i start thinking about this fic..I love the idea of LM of being a veela..Harry was a bit OCC but that was okay..I just LOVED all of the angst..i think that i cried because of one of the chaps. that LM almost dies..the lemons were well written..last but not least from what i could see there were no major noticeable mistakes with grammer of spelling..well can't wait to read more of ur wonderful stories and revuew the one i have read..Ja Matte Ne..^-^
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I thought I had put an OOC warning on this, my apologies if I failed to do so. The grammar and spelling was worked on very hard by my wonderful beta!
Date: 28/01/06 - 05:09 pm (26)
Great story. You might want to mark it incomplete or post the ending though, since it's disappointing to get that far through a story that is described as complete and discover that it isn't.
Author's Response: the last line of this fic is a repitition of the title "Holding On". Perhaps you were reading this when I was still posting it? Every story at this website is complete.