Date: 03/02/16 - 04:33 am (27)
Quite a good story. Interesting side of Lucius and Harry. Well done.
Date: 02/02/15 - 05:49 pm (1)
The story is great (but the formatting, unfortunate. Rather distracting, really.)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for alerting me to the formatting issue. I have gone through all the chapters personally and hope that I now have all the issues resolved. Sorry for the difficult read!!
Date: 19/12/12 - 07:29 pm (15)
I love this story, I also think that the love that both Lucius and Harry share is promising a happy life for both of them.
Date: 07/06/12 - 10:26 pm (1)
I've never had a review quite like this. Thank you very much? Um, if you care to elaborate my email is Keikokin@gmail.com
Date: 08/06/11 - 11:43 pm (27)
Interesting choice of villain. This went by so fast. I would have liked a bit more detail in spots but it was a fun read.
Author's Response:
Glad that you enjoyed it, sorry it wasn't detailed in certain spots.
-Keikokin
Date: 10/04/11 - 08:01 pm (27)
I love this story! This has quickly become one of my favorite pairings, and it seems unfortunantly rare to find it, at least so well written anyway! Thanks for a wonderful read!
Author's Response:
Well I am glad that you could easily find it here to read. Please keep on reading my stories.
-Keikokin
Date: 08/04/11 - 10:21 pm (27)
Wonderful. Moving and realistic. I love how you wrote Lucius and Draco's relationship and how you kept them so true to their characters. Well done. =D
Author's Response:
Glad that you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the compliments!
-Keikokin
Date: 17/10/10 - 07:34 am (27)
love the story !! SSooo Cute!! ^__________^
Author's Response: *blushes* Thanks Jennifer! :D
Date: 01/10/10 - 03:27 am (1)
Hmm, interesting, and you indeed caught my interest, but I find this opening a bit rushed. You're good at telling the story and keeping it moving, but you aren't using descriptions to make the story breathe. It is really hard to do, though, and all writers constantly struggle(especially me), so don't think I'm bashing you. But still, I like the idea so far!
Author's Response:
Glad that you enjoyed it, sorry it wasn't up to your expectations on the descriptions.
-Keikokin
Date: 06/08/10 - 09:21 pm (27)
That was so sweet! *wipes tears from eyes*
Author's Response: Sorry that it made you cry but glad that you enjoyed it Little Wolf.
Date: 12/11/09 - 06:29 pm (1)
:) I really liked this.
Author's Response: I am glad Nemoranda! :)
Date: 07/01/09 - 05:45 am (3)
“These students smell horrific,” Lucius groaned.
The Headmaster chuckled. “Indeed they do.”
That's hilarious. The headmaster agreed that his students smelled...I can totally see that randomness happening. *wipes away stray tear*
Brilliant
Author's Response: *big grin* I once worked at a high school and when it got hot out it really did smell. That was the inspiration for that line. Glad you liked it!!
Date: 04/01/09 - 07:45 pm (27)
Maybe you could write the sequel about what happens next. Do they have kids? Does Dumbledore go batty or insane? Or even go off into what harry does after school, like become minister or something.
Happy New Year!
Author's Response: I have thought many, many times about adding to this one. The trick is if I make it mpreg I tick some off. If I don't, well I tick people off. There's really no winning. Would you settle for little side stories?