A Poem in the Shower Disclaimer: They aren't mine, but they'd probably be treated better if they were. J Warning for implied M/M naughtiness! This poem is a companion piece to "Shower Scene". They can be read separately or together, whatever you wish. If you think this poem is okay, i.e. you didn't barf while reading, check out some other ones I have posted in this archive. I don't know where they are myself, but I'm sure they're here somewhere. Comments, questions, constructive criticisms welcome at jive_baby99@hotmail.com blonde detectives are VERY WELCOME.   A Poem in the Shower Ellie Leonard His thick fingers brush me, love me water runs rivulets down my spine I breathe his breath, warm and sweet his hungry mouth wetly seals my fate   He cherishes, brands, pleasures I'm moaning, calling his name How sweet to share this tight space with the only person I trust   Steam and pleasure rise from behind the curtain not knowing, not caring what the next day will bring   Gentle caresses drive me mad he's giving everything in his soul Blue eyes shine with love for me I explode in my flesh, filled with stars   Now we exist only for each other soapy, sweating, fingers pruning my phantom lover has evaporated again but even without him I am never alone.   Great? Crappy? Should I give up? Answer here: jive_baby99@hotmail.com