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From: Marcella Polman (marcellapolman@hotmail.com)
Date: 04/30/2005
Aww. This is so beautiful. I relish that the physical part starts before the emotional implications become clear to Ray. I'd like to elaborate on this but I can't find the words. I just love this story.

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