This story is the second one in a trilogy, right? Are you ever going to finish it and post the third story? I want to see a happy resolution between Fraser and RayV.
I really can't like any story that characterizes RayV as a bigot and homophobe who automatically rejects his dear friend Benny when he finds out about his relationship with RayK. Even if you don't slash RayV and Fraser, there's no denying that they have a special, loving friendship, and if you look closely at RayV in canon, you'll know that while he may be taken aback at Fraser's relationship with RayK, he would still want to have Benny in his life and will want him to be happy, and so at least accept RayK (if not try to be friends with him for Benny's sake). RayV is just too loyal to those he has loved to reject them. I hope the ending to your trilogy reflects this.