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From: slashslut
Date: 07/23/2007 |
this was bitter sweet; im so glad it had a happy ending:)
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From: BK
Date: 07/23/2007 |
Good scope and a "totally new front" for an AU (so many AUs remind you of other AUs--this one doesn't). All in all, a good satisfying read, and it could have even been longer. Only one tiny quibble, and it's my usual one: a few Britishisms stood out ("torch" instead of flashlight, for example). Nothing that hurt the story, though.
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From: MonicaPDX
Date: 07/21/2007 |
I *like* this. Neat concept, very well worked out. And heckuva lot of fun! [g] Enjoyed it all, but one bit I specially loved was, of course, Ray seeing Bob. ;) That had me giggling.
Great story, and I'm with the others - yeah, would really like to see more!
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From: skl
Date: 07/20/2007 |
This story is great. Any sequels possible?
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From: Phenyx
Date: 07/20/2007 |
That was wonderful. I love a warm fuzzy happy ending. And was that a Dead Zone reference I saw in Ray's choice of psuedoname?
As I was debating what I was going to say in this comment, a scrolled back to the title page and actually bothered to read the author name. Immediately I thought "Oh well yeah. Berty wrote it. Of course it's good." You're one of my favorite writers. Love it, love it, love it. I hope to see more.
Phenyx
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From: katherine
Date: 07/20/2007 |
You have got to write a sequel to this. The whole story was just amazing. Great idea for an AU. And I really would enjoy more.
I think my favorite part is how inarticulate Ray could be at times, and yet still so clear to Fraser. That was cool.
And I loved the reasoning you gave for why Ray and Stella got divorced. That was so perfect.
Also liked how you explained why Ray wasn't a cop any more. Very nice. Logical.
Katherine
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