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Comments on Geometry: Chapter 17, Awakening

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From: Rogue Crocodile (rogue_crocodile@hotmail.com)
Date: 05/21/2006
You can add me to your number of readers. I haven't been reading anything for months now but today I really needed a fic fix. I happened upon this story and it has kept me enthralled for many hours. It is very entertaining although not at all to my usual taste. I will be watching for future installments with eager anticipation. Thanks for keeping me up half the night, it was great!
From: CC
Date: 05/20/2006
Gon't just believe your concrete numbers. There are always people who for whatever reason, prefer not to make comments or reviews or to make them sparingly. I am one of those in general. I also personally prefer to do my reading in chunks. So, I am a reader who has been away for awhile but now I'm back... and enjoying what I read. Good luck.
From: Lydia (lydia888@hotmail.com)
Date: 05/14/2006
there was a poll? didn't see it. but if comments encourage you to continue writing, please consider yourself encouraged. it's a fun story to read
From: Ruth Von Elling
Date: 05/08/2006
Please keep writing!
From: JBean
Date: 05/07/2006
Count me as one of the dozens that didn't reply to your request last time--I saved the chapter to read later and forgot to come back to give you a 'Yo!' to let you know I'm still loving this series. Glad to see you continued on without my piddly little feedback. :)
From: Trina (trinaward2001@yahoo.com)
Date: 05/06/2006
Another great chapter! I'm really enjoying your series and am constantly checking for new chapters. Marina remains one of the best original characters I've found. Her relationships with Dief,Ray, and Ben are all strong ones and I'm hoping that once Ray and Ben are done processing the new info about Mina's nature,they'll get even stronger. More soon,please!
From: Lady Ivy
Date: 05/06/2006
Yeah, new Geometry! Take a break from the archive for a few days and have this to come back to. I can see why you said it was pivotal to the plot; I'm with Ray - start giving answers! But the story really does need this full development over time; it wouldn't have nearly the same impact if it was just told by narration that it does working it out in action and dialogue.

Glad to see this is continuing; please do not stop now.
From: Wordwitch (baenwitch@yahoo.com)
Date: 05/05/2006
I have observed this story going up chapter by chapter, but only today dared to read it. I was afraid of all sorts of bad writing.

I was surprised and delighted to find tight plotting, crisp characgerization, and an intriguing version of the love story.

Please do continue.
From: ranlynn (rdorrenbacher@msn.com)
Date: 05/05/2006
Very Nice.

Normaly I'm not to fond of OCs but I love your Marina.

I hope Fraser, Ray & Marina can work things out soon. Of the 3 of them I'd think Ray would be the first to reqain his equilibrium and then act as bridge to work out any problems/misunderstandings between Mina & Fraser.

And I'm curious as to what signifigance, if any that Methos finds in the fact the Fraser can 'talk' to Deifenbaker. Other than not seeing that type of bond in a millinia or more.

Thanks for a great read.
From: Andrea Brown
Date: 05/05/2006
Only nine of us responded? Which means at least 90 mroe who're reading but didn't say anything.

I didn't have any particular problems with the characterizations. Just keep going, please. AB
From: MonicaPDX2 (monicapdx2@aol.com)
Date: 05/05/2006
Yeah, keep on plugging away. Haven't even read it yet and already excited to see the next chapter. ;) And note: TV stations used to figure for each letter rec'd re a show, it meant there around 10 others who watched faithfully, but would never write. I'm betting it's the same w/fic. I know I never send as much feedback as I should...for one thing, because w/as much fic reading as I do, I'd spend most of my time emailing, LOL. (long ones, 'cause I can't shaddap. witness this.) Archive comments are a good development!
From: modueser
Date: 05/04/2006
Can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully, that will be soon?!

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