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Comments on A Passing Feeling

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From: ashuisha
Date: 04/29/2016
This was everything I love in a fanfic. Marriage, realistic children, gething through the extended family's disgust of the 'gay lifestyle', and the cute little twist at the end.

I look through the kidfic tags all the time for something like this, but those are usually sunshine and rainbows and completely unrealistic children.

Thank you.

From: Diane
Date: 07/31/2008
I really, really liked it. I was a bit confused at the beginning because I didn't know what Ray's current life was like, or even which Ray it was. Still, it was a good read once I got filled in, if a bit sad. Diane
From: Wonderfoo
Date: 06/03/2007
Wonderful story. It had all of my favorites: future fic, marriage, kids. I was happy to read it. I was also happy to read a fic by you. I can remember when I first started reading Slash 5 years ago, it was all about the NSYNC RPS, and yours was right at the top.
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From: springwoof
Date: 05/17/2005
This was beautiful.

I liked the kids. You made them normal kids, it was great.

Nice twist at the end with the pictures and Ray's dad.

Cool story! Very well done.
From: ToraK (tora_kowalski@btinternet.com)
Date: 05/11/2005
Oh, I really like this. You write all the different relationships so well. More please!
From: beverly (auntbey@hotmail.com)
Date: 05/07/2005
i really enjoyed this story, i was sorry to see it end!
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