Title: Pirates of the Caribbean, Version 2
Co-written by carelesscat and tiaoconnell
tiaoconnell@yahoo.com
Category: Pirates of the Caribbean (movie)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: spanking
Disclaimner: We don't own it even though we wish we did. We just play with it
Summary: Scenes of Pirates of the Caribbean re-written to include spanking!!
Pirates of the Caribbean, Version 2
Co-written by carelesscat and tiaoconnell
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Scene being interrupted and re-written: Elizabeth can hardly breathe due to her dress, and falls into the water as Norrington offers marriage--
Jack dove into the water after handing his things to the royal guards and swam after the fallen lady. The two soldiers watched in shock as Moments later, he emerged with an unconscious lady in his arms and he helped them lay her on the dock. With a knife, he sliced off her corset, leaving her now in only her undergarments. He smiled in satisfaction as she began to cough and sputter.
I never would've thought of that." said one of the guards. Jack looked shocked "Clearly you've never been to Singapore." Elizabeth looked at Jack, still wearing the medallion around her neck. "Where did you get that?" he asked in a low tone. a few seconds later, members of the royal navy were pointing their rifels and bayonetts at him.
Elizabeth looked at him surprised and was helped up by the 2 guards. Her father covered her with a cloak as Norrington started to speak. "Shoot him!" Governor Swann ordered the men with rifles. They all pulled back the cock of the gun.
"Father!" she looked at Norrington and said, "You decided to kill my rescuer?" Jack gave a dashing smile of feigned innocence at Commodore Norrington. "I believe thanks is in order." Commodore Norrington said as he extended his hand to Jack.
Jack weaved slightly and looked suspicious, then slowly extended his hand to shake Norrington's; only the Commondore held his hand tightly and rolled up his sleeve, revealing a P branded on his arm.
"had a brush with the East Indian trade, did we, Pirate?" Norrington asked incredulously. Govenor Swann looked utterly horrified as he looked Jack up and down. "Hang him!" he declared. He had no patience for pirates--not even a pirate that saved his daughter's life.
"keep your guns on him men. Gillette fetch me some irons. Well, well, Jack Sparrow isn't it?" said Norrington, having caught sight of the other tattoo the pirate sported. "Captain Jack Sparrow" Jack retorted.
Norrington looked around. "Where is your ship?" Jack gave a half smile, half smirk at Norrington. "I'm in the market as it were" he said with a slight sway. one of the guards said, "he wanted to commandier one." "i told you he was telling the truth." said the other one.
"He had these with him sir" the guard said, showing the Commodore Jack's prosessions. JAck peered at the man, wanting himt o be careful with his things. he looked at Jacks' gun, "no additional shot, or powder. A compass that doesn't point north" Norrington continued.
"You are without a dobut the worst pirate I have ever heard of" Norrington sneered. Jack however looks thrilled. "Ah, but you *have* heard of me" His eyes glisten with mischief.
Norrington grabs Jack's arm and leads him over to Gillette with the irons. Elizabeth walks behind and says, "Commodore, I must protest. "pirate or not this man saved my life!!" Norrington gave her a hard look. "One good deed doesn't redeem a man of a lifetime of wickedness"
"But it fairly seems enough to condemn him." says Jack. Norrington's look remained impassive "Indeed" Gillette locked him up and moved away
"Finally." Jack says and throws his irons around Elizabeth's neck. Elizabeth gasped and struggled as the color drained from the Governor's face. "No, don't shoot!!" he ordered half panicked.
"I knew you'd warm up to me. Commodore Norrington, my effects, please, and my hat. Commodore! Elizabeth. It is Elizabeth isn't it?" Looking uetterly disgusted, the young woman spat out "It's *Miss Swann*"
"Miss Swann, if you'd be so kind. Come, come, dear. We don't have all day. Now if you'd be very kind." Slowly, feeling like germs were infesting her as she touched him, she put on his things. as she put on the strap around his waist he said, "Easy on the goods, darling."
Elizabeth looked horrified and swallowed hard as bile rose in her throat at his words. "You're despicable" she spat out in a low and dangerous tone.
Sticks and stones, love. I save your life, you saved mine, we're square. "Gentlemen, m'lady, you will always remember this as the day that you almost caught Captain Jack Sparrow!"
Elizabeth squeaked and gasped as he threw her at the waiting men. The Governor looked decidedly angry and said in an annoyed tone "*Now* will you shoot him?" "Open fire!" Norrington yells.
Soldiers begin chasing Jack threw the city as he escapes and runs off. Elizabeth, still in undergarments and her father's jacket, looks upset while Norrington glares at her. Norrington looks at the Governor and says, "Let me take her home and get some warm clothes on her."
"I can go home just fine on my own!" Elizabeth retorted hottly. The Governor nodded. "That would be most appreciated" Norrington smiled and grabbed Elizabeth's arm and started walking back to her home. "Hey, let go of me!" Elizabeth said sternly, trying to pull away.
he held her still and said, "if you keep this up, Miss Swann you'll be finding yourself in a very uncomfortable position." he said as they got nearer to her home.
She gasped and stared at him for a moment. "What are you talking about? You---you can't do anything to me! Just ebcause you're a commodore and you offered to marry me doesn't mean anything!"
he looked at her and said, "it's a little surprise...you'll find out when we get inside your house." She scowled darkly at him and kicked him hard. When he graoned in pain and grabbed his leg, she took off running towards her house. The plain was to get inside and bolt the door before he could recover.
Norrington graoned, bent down and rubbed his leg, then ran after her. She burst into the house and tried to slam the door behind her. "Stay away from me Norrington!" she shouted he stopped the door from slamming and pushed the door open, "I will NOT stay away from you, Miss Swann."
Elizabeth backed awy from him, the jacket dropping to the floor. "And why not?" she demanded. "because i have something that needs to be taken care of before we move on." Norrington says sternly looking at her.
"Where are we moving on two and what are these things you speak of?" She put her hands on her hips "And stop talking in riddles and just say what you mean already!"
"actually, let ME show you." he said grabbing her arm again and walking her into her fathers' study. "Ouch! James, you're hurting my arm!" she hollered as he pulled her in the room. He said nothing, merely shut the door and let go of her arm.
Elizabeth rubbed her arm, her face full of hurt at the hand print left behind. "I want you to leave now" she said softly. "not until i'm finished." Norrington said sitting down in a chair and patting his lap. Elizabeth stared at him blankly. "What? I don't understand? Please, just go, I don't want to see you anymore today, you hurt my arm"
"Come here, now."
"Why?" she asked, backing into a corner. "Don't hurt me please! I won't marry a wife beater!!" "I don't beat women." he said softly.
Her face softened slightly. "Then---what are you going to do?" she whispered. "i'm going to punish you." he said crooking his finger at her She gasped and bit her pretty lip, but slowly walked twoards him, her eyes full of confusion. "I don't understand.... what did I do?"
"you talked back at me to keep Captain Sparrow alive."
"I thought I owed him Commodore--James. He saved my life"
"you never talk back at me in front of my men or your father." he scolded. Elizabeth gulped as he went slowly towards him, tiny steps at a time. "I didn't mean to" she whispered. "I'm sorry" "i know you are...but you will now be spanked because of it so that hopefully you won't do it again."
"Do you have to?" she was only inches away from him now, looking up into his eyes. "yes, my love." he said and grabbed her wrist gently. "Love?" she gasped, her other hand shielding her pretty backside. he smiled and pulled her so that she was standing right next to his lap.
Her hand reached out to gently touch his cheek. Could she love this man? he took her hand and kissed it...then he gently laid her across his lap. She gave a little whimper as he did so. "Please James---I'm so sorry" she whispered breathily.
"As i said before...i know you are." he said and gently pulled her undergarments down to her knees. She squirmed, and her hand flew back once more. "James, I'm scared!" "don't be scared...have you ever been spanked?" he said moving her hand away.
She shook her head no. "don't worry...you'll feel some sting in your backside and you'll have trouble sitting still after a while." She whimpered, and held onto his leg. he lightly moved his hand over her very beautiful backside.
her bottom was slightly wet from her fall into the water, and she shivered as he ran his hand over it. then he held her waist with the other hand and raised his spanking hand and brought it down hard on her backside SMACK
She gasped "Owww!" her legs kicked and she tried to twist off his lap. he held her firm and gave her more spanks to each cheek SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK
She sniffled and squirmed. "I'm sorry, I'll be good, please stop James, I'm so sorry!" he gave her 6 hard spanks to her sit spot SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK
She started to cry softly. "Why are you being spanked?" "i was bad!!!" she said, tears dripping down her cheeks "and how were you bad?" he asked giving her a spank to her backside SMACK
"Owww! I talked back?" she said rather uncertainly "And will you do it again?" he asked "No I promise!" she began to sob he smiled and said, "Ok." and gently rubbed her back and tried to calm her. "Hold me?" she whispered through her tears
Norrington righted her in his arms, and kissed her head, then carefully carried her to her bedroom. "change into your nightgown and i'll tuck you in."
She nodded while he waited outside the door. She put on her lacy white nightgown, and her red bottom could be seen through the material. With a wet face from tears, she opened the door for him to come back in
he walked in and smiled and said, "come, let's tuck you in." She let him pick her up and lay her on her stomach in the bed. "It hurts really bad" she pouted "i know...that is what a spanking is. it's supposed to hurt. it's a reminder of what you did wrong and will happen again if you misbehave again." he scolded.
She sniffled and nodded as he tucked the covers around her. Then he kissed her head once more and tucked a wet curl behind her ear. Elizabeth fell into a peaceful sleep as Norrington went to join the search for Jack.
Original Scene: The fight in the blacksmith shop between Jack Sparrow and Will Turner
Jack is running around staying out of the way of Norrington and his men. He jumps inside the Blacksmith's shop when he sees some of Norrington's men. He notices the sleepng Mr. Brown and tries to wake him but to no avail. he decides to find something to pry the irons off and uses a metal prod to spur the donkey so that the irons break.
It's then he hears the door start to open after he gets the irons off and heads for cover. Will enters and calms the poor donkey, but notices the hat, ignoring the drunk man on the floor. However, it was the hammer that got his attention. "Not where I left you..." he muttered to hismelf.
Will walks over to the hat and almost touches it, then someone, holding a sword, catches his attention. "You're the one they are hunting," he said slowly. "The pirate"
"You seem somewhat familiar. Have I threatened you before?" Will gave a skeptical look. "I make a point of avoiding familiarity with pirates!" he announced with pride. "Ah well, then it would be a shame to put a black mark on your record. So, if you'll excuse me..." he says turning away and starts to leave.
Will draws a sword and points it at Jack in an expert fashion.
"Do you think this wise, boy - crossing blades with a pirate?" Jack asked drawing his own sword.
"You threatened Miss Swann!" he said darkly, his features filled with anger. Jack smiles and runs his sword up and down Will's sword, "Only a little."
They begin to sword fight among the hanging swords, until Will throws his own sword into the door, barring Jack's exit with a smug look.
Jack tries the door but it is unsuccessful. He starts to walk back, "That...is a wonderful trick...except, once again you are between me and my way out. And now you have no weapon." he says smiling.
"Except one" Will fakes a kick to Jack's groin, making him jump away, dropping his sword in the process. "My strength" Will states as he dives on top of Jack. Jack rolls over on top of Will and says, "But you know nothing about pirates." he says and punches Will in the stomach
Will groans and clutches his stomach, rolling over to the side and smacking a table. Jack starts to move out of the way. Several empty glasses fall onto the floor, amking Jack dance out of the way of the glass and knock over several swords in the process. he grimaces when the banging and clanging of the swords hit the floor. he gets up and looks at Will.
Will staggers to his feet and lunges at Jack The pirate quickly moves out of the way. Will tumbled, grabbing Jack's shirt and ripping it on the process, and broke a table. Jack looked at his shirt and glared at Will, "that was MY best shirt." Will sat up from amid the pile of broken wood. "Oops" he said sheepishly, looking down.
Jack shook his head and dusted himself off. Will got up slowly."Sorry, didn't mean to do that. Was grabbing for your ass actually" he smirked, trying to toy with the pirate. It was his life's goal to make pirates utterly miserable whenever he had the chance.
Jack walked up to Will and backhanded him in the face. Will fell backwards, landing hard on his back with a moan, a little blood trickling from the side of his mouth. He looked at Jack, shocked and horrified "you should show manners towards me." he scolded.
"You---you hit me" he said, sniffling. He had never been hit before in that manner, and it really upset him, or so it seemed.
he looked down at Will and said, "sorry to hit you, but you should show better manners to me, boy." Will rubbed his now swollen lower lip. then Jack turned around to walk toward the door
Will rushed up behind Jack with part of the broken table and smacked him squarely across the backside with it Jack yelped and turned around looking at Will. Will smirked, still holding the piece of wood like one would hold a baseball bat
"you little brat. how dare you hit me like that." he said drawing his sword. "And why the bloody hell shouldn't I?" Will asked. Just then the drunk woke and smacked Jack over the head with his bottle of booze. The pirated fell over face first and Will laughed hysterically as Norrington's men entered a moment later.
"excellent work, Mr Brown.You've assisted in the capture of a dangerous fugitive."
"What the fuck? No way, I did that he was skunk drunk!" Will said with a stomp. Norrington looked angrily at Will, "hold your tongue, Mr. Turner." He stuck out his tongue at Norrington.
he looked at his men and said, "take Captain Sparrow to his cell...i have some business to take care of." he said looking back to Will. "Awww, looky my shop, wuhdid dos boys do?" the owner slurred.
Will gulped and took a step back. "Mr Brown...go and have a drink...i want to talk privately with young Mr Turner here." "Oh, drinky sounds Looooooooooovely" the man stumbled and staggered out of the shop
"Um---um---" Will said, his voice rather high-pitched. Norrington glared at Will. Will took several steps backwards. "Aren't you going to escort the pirate to the jail?" he squeaked
"No, Mr Turner...I'm going to deal with your attitude."
"What? Why?" he whined, sounding like a little boy.
"for you sudden outburst...that was very disrespectful." Norrington scolded.
"I didn't mean too" he said. "And that pirate hit me!" "it doesn't matter if HE hit you...i'm talking about that sudden outburst you did when i was TALKING to Mr Brown." he growled at Will.
Will's lower lip trembled and he backed away further, right into the door. There was no escape. "I'm sorry" he whispered, hanging his head. Norrington took off his sword from his hip and walked toward Will Will watched him with wide eyes, then ducked his head again
Norrington looked at him and said, "i'm not going to hurt you, Mr Turner." "Then what are you gonna do?" he asked, not looking up, swiping the blood from his mouth again. Norrington walked up and grabbed Will's arms, "i'm going to discipline you."
"No, I don't want a spanking!" Will shouted
he didn't say anything as he led Will to Mr Brown's tool table. "I'll be good, I promise, I'm really sorry"
Norrington brushed some of the tools off the table and bent Will over it. Will squirmed to get away, but Norrington was a lot stronger then he looked. "I'll be good I swear!! Don't spank me please! I'm not a little kid!"
"Mr Turner...you ACTED like a little child...so you will be punished like one." he said as he started to take Will's pants down
"Hey, you can't do that! Stop that, right now!! noooooooooooo!" he howled as his backside was exposed to the cool air
"i AM a lot older than you, Mr Turner." he said as he put his hand on Will's back
"But I don't want you too, I'm sorry, I am, I won't do it again!" "It's too late for that." Norrington said as he raised his other hand and brought it down hard on Will's backside SMACK "OWWW!"
SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK Will squirmed and tried to get away as large pink handprints appeared on his cheeks. "I'm sorry, I really am!!" he howled.
Norrington kept him still and said, "Why are you being punished?" he asked as he gave Will another spank SMACK
"for being rude!! OWW" WIll sniffled and put his face on the table under his arms. Norrington nodded and said, "Are you going to act like this again?" he asked as he gave him another hard spank on his sit spot SMACK
"No Sir! Oww, please stop, I'll be very good, I promise sir!"
"I hope you will be good...and to make sure..." as he said that he gave Will 2 extra hard spanks on his backside and sit spot SMACK SMACK SMACK SMACK Will started to cry loudly
then he started to gently rub Will's back and said, "Mr Turner...didn't you ever get punished when you were living with your parents?"
"My father was gone so much" Will said softly through his tears. "And my mother only spanked me once, with my pants on,a nd then she cried and said she'd never do it again."
he sighed and said, "If you EVER do anything like this again...I'll be using my belt on your backside." Will broke into sobs "I didn't mean to be a bad boy" he sounded scared.
"It's alright, Mr. Turner...it's all over."
"Will" he whispered
"Hm?" he asked.
"My name--is Will" A hand snuck back to rub his red backside. Norrington gave his hand a slight slap and said, "No rub."
Will howled and pulled his hand away, hanging his head on the table again "Sorry" he mumbled. Wordlessly he got up and ambled to a corner, putting his face in his arms again.
Norrington looked around the shop and couldn't believe the mess. He said, "Will Turner, I want you to clean this place up." he said as he started walking to the door almost walking into the sword that was still stuck in the wood. "And, take out this sword."
"Yes sir" Will said, his voice muffled from his covered face. Norrington felt bad for hurting Will...but he shouldn't have made a mess of the shop. Then he walked out to check on Elizabeth.
END SCENE 2
Next scene to be re-written: When Will confronts Norringotn about going to save Elizabeth.