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The Four Season's
by: Jim Nasium
Winter comes and goes so slow
it's really not my friend
ya know I don't look forward to
that time of year again
Springs the time I like the most
when I go out and enjoy, and toast
the promise that the spring buds bring
soon will be summer time again
summer time for me you see
has always been the best of all
I like to work in the summer
and straight through to the fall
then comes fall and I get so blue
cause I know what it is that I gott'a do
get myself ready for bad weather it's true
ya know I hate winter don't you ?
©1999 Jim Nasium
=>THIS IS THE RE WRITE<=
The Four Season's
by: Jim Nasium
Winter comes and goes so slow
it's really not my friend
ya know that I look forward to
the spring of the year again
Springs the time I like the most
so I go out and enjoy, and toast
the promise that the spring buds bring
soon will be summer time again
summer time for me you see
has always been the best of all
I do my concrete work in the summer
and straight through to the fall
then comes fall and I get so blue
cause I know what it is that I gott'a do
get myself ready for winter weather it's true
and wish the summer a fond ado'
each season to me is special
and each in it's own way
I like living here with four season's
and don't have much more to say
©1999 Jim Nasium
AHHHH, but there was another kind'a The Four Season's that popped into my mind...
here's the original of that other kind's four season's poem and then below it is the re write of it...
I recall the sixty's
as if they were yesterday
and I recall the sweet sweet sounds
of the music we would play
Little anthony and the imperials
Diana Ross, and the Supreams
but the music I really like the most
was the music of my dream
it was the music sung by one man
his first name was Franky they say
I saw him sing a lot that spring
when I was out in LA
and I saw him every time that he
would come east to Atlantic city
and when he took center stage
he'd hit a high note for me
his was the music of romance
when I was young, I'd love to dance
there was only one singer and one group
the four seasons, and that's the scoop!
©1999 Jim Nasium
=> The Re Write <=
The Four Season's
I recall the sixty's
as if they were yesterday
and I recall the sweet motown sounds
of the music we would play
Little anthony and the imperials
Diana Ross, and the Supreams
but the music I really like the most
was the music that said what I mean
it was the music sung by one man
his first name was Franky they say
I saw him sing a lot that spring
when I was out in LA
singing to me to walk like a man
and saying that big girls don't cry
singing about some girl named Ronnie
and to this day I wonder why
and I saw him every time that he
would come east to Atlantic city
and when he took center stage
he'd hit a high note just for me
his was the music that I loved
when I was young, I'd had no reason's
there was only one singer and one group
Franky Vallie and The Four Seasons
©1999 Jim Nasium
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