JAOA: Missing the Present
Year of the Republic 25,002
by Black Rose


JAOA Webpage: http://digitalmidnight.simplenet.com/garden/jaoa.html
Category: AU, Angst, H/C
Disclaimer: George Lucas is god. I just slip in and play with the toys when he's not looking.
Notes: [this is telepathy] and these are thoughts.
Pairing: Q/O
Rating: R
Series: JAOA
Summary: Qui-Gon's health has taken a heavy toll on both himself and Obi-Wan.


He woke slowly, floating up from black depths darker than any night. There had been a time when he would have woken instantly, sprung from sleep to wakefullness, instantly alert. Now it was a struggle against the comfortable drifting, the hazy lingering state that was neither dream nor reality but tinged with the cloying web of drugs that beckoned him back down.

Qui-Gon hated the feeling. Hated the heaviness of his eyelids, the padding that seemed to swath the inside of his head and kept everything at a distance. Hated the dry, parched sensation of mouth and skin, the dull ringing within his ears. Hated, especially, the wet hitch in his chest which scratched at the back of his throat and tickled damply with each indrawn breath.

A carelessly drawn deeper breath reminded him, of a sudden, why he would gladly tolerate all of them in order to be rid of the twice damned cough. It ripped through him, jerking him roughly to full awareness even as it propelled him onto his side where he could curl around the breathless stabbing in his chest as the cough shook him. Pain burst bright white against the backs of his eyelids with each spasm, knifing through his temples and his throat.

A soft light flared into the darkened room, calling it forth from the shadows. The hands were there at once, pressed to his back above the protesting lung. Warmth spread from them, a blanket of Force that sank into his abused flesh and soothed the spasming muscles. He coughed again, holding futilely to the shape of his own skull as the bones threatened to fly apart in shards of blinding pain with each jarring motion. A breath drew in almost by accident, hesitating a long second before settling into his lung with a fluid filled scratching. He tightened his diaphram against it, holding stubbornly to the breath, determined not to cough it forth once more.

The heat wrapped itself around him, easing the tight band around his chest, letting him tentatively draw another breath and then another, the chain of coughs broken. Hardly daring to sigh his relief, Qui-Gon slowly uncurled, sparks dashing before his closed eyes as circulation returned to cramped muscles.

The hands urged him gently to his back, slipping beneath his tunic to rest against his chest. The warmth eased across the muscles there, sinking into the chill of the knotted scars and gently soothing the dull constant ache in the empty spaces within his chest. Qui-Gon sighed in truth, coughed slightly, a quick chuff of air that was nothing like the wracking cough. There was the metallic taste of blood on his tongue.

"Master?" Such a soft whisper and so much depth of worry in it. It was ironic, Qui-Gon thought to himself. If generations of Padawans had been conditioned to respond without question to the commands of their Masters, then generations of Masters had been equally conditioned to respond to that one single word. You could shout it in the crowded dining hall and watch every Jedi Master in it, whether they currently had a Padawan or no, turn automatically towards the sound. Even as he, who had not had a Padawan in years, was compelled to open heavy eyes and focus upon the anxious face that hovered above him.

What he saw there gave him pause. There were times when he still expected to reach out and brush the prickly fringe of shorn hair, when he found himself grabbing for where the swing of a Padawan's braid should have been. When he expected to open his eyes to a sober faced youth whos spirit danced only in his grey-blue eyes, bright and fast as quicksilver for any who might catch it.

He's still young compared to you, old man, Qui-Gon told himself tiredly. But oh, the lines of age upon that face, carved deep between the fair brows and around a mouth once given to sly smiles. Careworn and tired, that face, with worry only deepening the lines upon it and shadowing the red rimmed eyes that no longer sparkled as they once had. Fine strands of hair framed the face and almost brushed down upon Qui-Gon's own, strands that were fast losing the last of their once golden honey color to the unrelenting spread of steel grey.

Time had laid its hands upon the face he loved best and he, living in the days already gone, had missed the passage of the present.

"Obi-Wan," he whispered hoarsely. Seeing the hardness flash in the darkening eyes he berated himself and fell silent, reaching up in wordless entreaty to touch the curve of one cheek. His lover leaned into the touch but the worried eyes never left his, eyes that asked for reassurance but had long since given up the hope of receiving it.

A pang flared in the Jedi Master's heart, a bitter touch of sorrow that lingered. He knew the illness within him, breathed it in and out with every breath that caught in his chest, half drowned in fluid that would not leave him be. Knew every twinge and ache left by old scars and the failing limits of a body that, try as it might, could no longer meet the demands of his mind. He knew all of it, and though it still brought him up short at times he had accepted it and made his peace with what could be expected.

Those around him, he remembered sadly, had no such peace. No such assurance, nothing but hope and the helpless pain of witnessing circumstance that could not be changed. It showed in Obi-Wan's face, in the weary eyes that bore too many of their own burdens and tried, in vain, to bear his lover's burdens as well. Oh, love.

Slipping his hand into the soft hair at the nape of the younger man's neck, Qui-Gon exerted a strength that had still not entirely left him and drew Obi-Wan down until their lips met.

The other man made a wordless sound of protest, trying to pull away. Qui-Gon held him firmly, pressing the kiss home until he felt the firm line of the lips against his own relax and Obi-Wan almost hungrily returned the caress. Taste and touch, familiar beyond all else, and Qui-Gon knew that when the inevitable came he would hate most of all to give up such a simple thing as a kiss.

When they broke away Qui-Gon hastily moved his hand, pressing his fingertips to warm lips before Obi-Wan could speak. [Shhh.] Pulling the still resisting head down, he tucked the smaller man against his side, resting his cheek on a pillow of silken hair. [You need caring for, love.]

Obi-Wan's response was an incredulous noise that might almost have been a laugh, his breath warm against Qui-Gon's throat. "I do?"

[Yes, you do,] Qui-Gon replied firmly. His hands found the knots of tension in his lover's back, fingertips playing across them. The Force came sluggishly to his call where once it would have leapt to it, but come it did and he felt Obi-Wan reluctantly relax as it soothed him.

"Don't," the younger man protested, half heartedly trying to draw away. "You don't have the strength to spare."

[And you do?] It was blunt, but it drove the point home. Obi-Wan's expression was stubborn, his lips pressed tight. He did not speak the lie but neither would he meet Qui-Gon's eyes.

Sighing softly, Qui-Gon pressed a light kiss to the other man's brow, feeling him flinch. Other kisses followed, feathered across cheeks and lips. [You need rest,] he whispered between their minds. [My Obi-Wan... you don't need to bear the weight of the universe on your back. Rest.]

Obi-Wan shook his head slightly, reaching up to cup Qui-Gon's cheek, his fingertips stroking the silvered beard. "No," he whispered. "Not the universe. Just us."

[Then let me bear my own weight for a time,] Qui-Gon told him, pressing a gentle kiss to his lips. [Lay down and rest, here beside me.]

"That isn't it," Obi-Wan protested irritably. "Qui-Gon, please. You need..."

[I need to know that you are alright,] the older man interrupted firmly. His long fingertips found the crease between Obi-Wan's brow, soothed it. Sculpted the lines of brow and cheek, skimming across lips and jaw. Memorizing, in touch, features they already knew by heart.

"I'm fine," Obi-Wan replied obstinately, but his eyes closed beneath the light touch. "Qui-Gon, you need to rest. Conserve your strength. The Healers say..."

[The Healers are wise, but they only speak of possibilities.] Qui-Gon took Obi-Wan's chin in his hand, nudged it up until the other man was forced to meet his eyes. [Don't spend your energy worrying about the future. This instant, here, is the only instant that need matter.]

Obi-Wan shook his head slowly. "Master..." The word slipped, huskily, from his lips like the echo of years gone by. Qui-Gon kissed him again, teasing forth a reluctant response.

[Rest, my love. We will both rest.] Memories, a hundred images spun between them, countless nights curled within each others arms, too tired to do more then hold close as sleep closed over them. Nights where the future had not intruded, where the past was put behind them and all that existed was the cocoon of warmth about their bodies as kisses were exchanged.

Obi-Wan's breath caught. "That was then," he whispered brokenly. "Now..." Fear vibrating between them, fear of a grief shrouded future that seemed to strech out with hungry fingers. Fear that haunted each faltering breath, each wracking cough and lonely vigil; the helpless fear of loss.

[Oh, love.] Qui-Gon pulled the smaller man close, as though arms along might merge flesh to flesh, dissolve the distance of body to body until only one complete whole remained. [The future will come as it will. Don't let it sour this moment. We are here, we are together right now. Live this moment with me, and we will face the future when it comes.]

"I don't want to loose you," Obi-Wan breathed softly, the words an admission whispered for their ears alone.

[There is no death,] Qui-Gon replied gently. [And I will always be with you. Now, and in all of the moments yet to come.]

The younger man nodded slowly, lifting his face for a kiss that held a kind of quiet desperation. The still silence of the night closed around them, a moment preserved in the quiet of two hearts that beat a slow rhythm together.


[...to the next stage]

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