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Reviewer: xan - Signed
Date: 24/02/08 - 05:15 pm (Chapter 1)

I Like This story. When's the next chapter?

Author's Response: should there be another part? Please email me and we can talk about it. Keikokin at gmail.com

Reviewer: Anonymous - Anonymous
Date: 04/12/07 - 10:35 am (Chapter 1)

Good story, but hard to read as one huge paragraph.

Author's Response: oh nuts. Okay I'll try to get it fixed. thanks