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Comments on Devolution

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From: House
Date: 09/28/2009
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From: Nihilla
Date: 12/12/2008
That was brilliant. I was transported.
From: Dariclone
Date: 06/15/2008
Foreman *owns* House, Awesome!
From: Zulu
Date: 11/21/2007
Oh, man, this was great. Perfect opening line, yes yes yes. Man, I need to find more of your stuff. *goes searching*
From: Olivia Zaratinga
Date: 08/20/2007
I love the first line, Loved House broken and trembling. I would love to read more of Dom!Foreman/House. Well, I'd love to read about anyone making House tremble and beg, really.
From: karona
Date: 12/11/2006
Sweet mother of dog. Holy hannah. Okay, except for the word "stardust". That didn't seem right.

But hawt damn. Excellent piece of work.
From: BlueGemEyes
Date: 10/30/2006
Dominant Foreman smut...there needs to be MORE of it in the world, because it makes me VERY happy! Yeah for you!
From: simmysim
Date: 10/15/2006
onewayfreak: Have you ever seen that one good Foreman/House fic by Baked Goldfish or whoever?

simmysim: nope, what happeneds?

onewayfreak: https://www.squidge.org/housefanfiction/archive/5/devolution.html

onewayfreak: It's hot

simmysim: holy shit, lol, that opening line

simmysim: as;dkfla

onewayfreak: It's SO good

onewayfreak: Like, oh man. Foreman is SO HOT

simmysim: God, reading this

simmysim: it's like

simmysim: Chase doesn't even stand a chance

simmysim: Hooly shit

simmysim: hooooolly aklsdjf

simmysim: dfgkl

simmysim: sdfjkls

simmysim: jg

onewayfreak: It's AMAZING, isn't it?

simmysim: YES

simmysim: I AM C/P THIS CONVO AS FEED BACK

onewayfreak: LOLOL

onewayfreak: Like, sgjsagjasgjashj

onewayfreak: He's so FORCEFUL

simmysim: And it's so. like, I was always, "Foreman would top, but I don't really WANT to read House as a bottom"

simmysim: but she did it SO WELL

onewayfreak: YES

onewayfreak: House as a bottom always seems weird to me, just because, I'm not used to it. But this worked PERFECTLY.

simmysim: It DID. House's response was a muffled broken yes please yes.

simmysim: It's like. There's no shame in bending to Foreman lol

onewayfreak: YES

onewayfreak: EVen HOUSE can't resist it

simmysim: It was good, the way House was out of his head, overfocused and twitching like an animal.

simmysim: FWASKGJADLFKGD

simmysim: I wish this was Foreman/Chase so I could actually orgasm, but that brought me pretty close lol

onewayfreak: The style is amazing too

simmysim: YES

onewayfreak: Like it's not just the situation, it's that this is written REALLY WELL

simmysim: That's written by someone who has gotten over the fact that she's really, really good, and she isn't showing off, she's just putting all her energy into telling a story

simmysim: And it's like. ADFKASDGADFBGa

onewayfreak: House responded primordially, a quiet, mournful gasp like the end of the world, half a second of naked and open begging; Foreman grinned wider.

onewayfreak: YES

onewayfreak: I wish this person wrote more

simmysim: ASDFKASJKDFL OKAY I'M GONNA POST THIS
From: Misha
Date: 07/23/2006
I absolutely LOVE this. Pure porn, and I also love House being the bottom, and this incredibly HOT Foreman. GO YOU! You rock!! =D
From: Kiriomi
Date: 01/16/2006
My God.

I absolutely *adored* this. It was pure, unadulterated smut, yes...but good smut. Well written smut. Smut that begs a follow up because it has left me curious as to what happens when they end up back at work, House with a nice Foreman-brand hicky on his neck.

Curiousity killed the cat, they say.

The cat says, "Screw that, I wanna know what happens."

:x
From: sasha
Date: 01/15/2006
Every House fic that I 've read (good or bad) has always had House as the one in control. So not only do I think that this story is absolutely amazing because it puts him on the bottom but you also managed to write it in such a way that kept both men in character in a totally believable situation.
From: Ali
Date: 01/14/2006
Wow. Hot. Evocative and absorbing - this is really well written. It's angry and it's sexy and it's graphic. I love it.

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