From: Alexya
Date: 04/13/2006 |
The last line was haunting. Very much so haunting. And I loved it
-A-
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From: denbigh
Date: 01/09/2006 |
oooh. very good... that last line.... will there be a sequel?
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From: barbara
Date: 10/25/2005 |
Ironic mistake on your part (not funny, since I'm not a slash fan, and I am Jewish)--A chosson is the groom. Kallah is the bride.
Barbara
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From: Ritaann
Date: 10/07/2005 |
Hey! You didn't out a slash warning on that and I am a bit ticked off at the last line. Admittedly it was well written and it was very interesting: I wasn't sure where you were going to take the story yet I ploughed through thinking that this was one of the few Wil/House gen fics round to be stuck with a surprise ending !
I think the catagory should be changed to add in slash... or at least light slash but it definatly had slash over tones
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From: icegirl99
Date: 08/16/2005 |
Oh my God, I think I'm gonna cry. That was so sad and painful to read.
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From: Lizzie
Date: 07/12/2005 |
I think pre-slash would be a better category than drama-angst to distinguish this from a House/Wilson friendship.
It's well written and flows nicely. Structurally it's good, you don't give away the ending until the very last.
My problem with it is that it makes both Wilson and House look stupid. Why does Wilson keep marrying these women if it's House that he really wants? Why is House such a wimp put up with it and keep coming back?
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From: Lizzie
Date: 07/12/2005 |
I think pre-slash would be a better category than drama-angst to distinguish this from a House/Wilson friendship.
It's well written and flows nicely. Structurally it's good, you don't give away the ending until the very last.
My problem with it is that it makes both Wilson (and House) look stupid. Why does Wilson keep marrying these women if it's House that he really wants? Why is House such a wimp put up with it and keep coming back?
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From: ACW
Date: 07/11/2005 |
This is just lovely. I'm not Jewish, but my brother converted when he married, so I'm familiar with Jewish weddings. You imbued the ceremony with such pathos from Wilson and longing from House, and all of that without dialogue. The bit with the ring broke my heart.
Congrats on a great job.
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