From: Anon
Date: 07/11/2006 |
Sorry I'm not better at this, but this was good. I thought the metaphors-theme was great.
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From: Carol
Date: 05/03/2005 |
Well done, overall, although I think you painted Julie very harshly. Still, I suppose there are people that insensitive and self-absorbed out there.
And one line -- "I doubt if you'll ever be able to repay me," James said, "I'm a very kind person." -- KILLED me. Love it!
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