From: marklee
Date: 09/09/2009 |
Thanks for the mentioning, This clearly shows that you put a great deal of care to your work.
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From: weaksauce
Date: 07/12/2009 |
Usually I don't comment, but wow. Worst. Fanfic. EVAR.
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From: s
Date: 01/26/2009 |
LOL TROLLLLLL.
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From: ham
Date: 01/21/2009 |
wow, that was awful
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From: louie
Date: 12/27/2008 |
not that good... sorry =/
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From: Carlie
Date: 12/09/2008 |
PWP in this case stands for point-what-point? Dreadful.
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From: Salira
Date: 12/09/2008 |
Thats... kinda terrible.
Maybe the worst I've ever read? Spell and grammar check would be great...so would a plot and the charachters actually talking like... well... themselves.
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From: rawr
Date: 09/14/2008 |
She wore really high black suede boots and skinny black jeans with a long, slinky, red, strapless, glittery, see-through shirt that flared out under her boobs like an empire-waist dress.......................................... Needs moar adjectives. Really. Cause I *care* what your mary sue is wearing.
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From: amy
Date: 08/16/2008 |
o...k... that was really stupid! It didn't make any sense whatsoever!
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From: Marissa
Date: 05/12/2008 |
What was that?
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From: Q33NY
Date: 02/10/2008 |
Huh? This story makes no sense whatsoever.
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