From: Skylar
Date: 09/24/2008 |
I really like it. Well done
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From: Jen
Date: 04/07/2008 |
I had just rewatched that episode a couple of days ago and it definitely needed this kind of follow-up! nice, hot story, but EWWW, don't call it his "throbbing member"! please? maybe it's just me and I know it's not really constructive criticism, but the 3 or so times that line came up it was a major turn-off. but other than that - sexy story. keep going!
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