From: Meggie
Date: 07/27/2007 |
I love this fic. I'm sure I've read it somewhere before, but I can't remember if I ever commented, so I'm doing so now.
Your writing and characterization were excellent. I especially liked the last line...way to do away with the cliché of two bodies fitting against each other the first time.
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From: Meggie
Date: 07/27/2007 |
I love this fic. I'm sure I've read it somewhere before, but I can't remember if I ever commented, so I'm doing so now.
Your writing and characterization were excellent. I especially liked the last line...way to do away with the cliché of two bodies fitting against each other the first time.
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From: Meggie
Date: 07/27/2007 |
I love this fic. I'm sure I've read it somewhere before, but I can't remember if I ever commented, so I'm doing so now.
Your writing and characterization were excellent. I especially liked the last line...way to do away with the cliché of two bodies fitting against each other the first time.
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From: Aurore
Date: 06/26/2007 |
I love this fic.
*Praises authoress as god*
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From: Bonnie
Date: 05/01/2007 |
I loved the story, and I loved the Bruce Cockburn reference. What more could I want? Thank you.
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From: anon
Date: 03/26/2007 |
i love this story! i can't understand why no one else has posted, doesn't seem like anyone posts comments here, but your story deserves it. you have the characterization down pat.
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