From: Stella Omega
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Date: 05/23/2008 |
I see there is no email address listed-- I suppose this is one of the writers who've dropped out of view? I hope she's around to hear me say what wonderful writing I think this is!
Jack's fatigue, like an undertow in the tide, is so fabulous a lietmotif. Exhausted!sex, yay! And the last line is perfect; This night the sword missed him cleanly.
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