From: gloriana
Date: 08/21/2008 |
Hello DeNile,
Just a comment to say how much I loved the voice you have for Ray in this story: witty, and self-deprecating, and fun to read. His reactions to Fraser are classic :) Two bits I liked the best are:
He is also wearing sunglasses and boots, and, yes, Frannie has the right idea, boots really are the right way to go.
(a fun reversal) and:
He looks down at himself and blushes. Oh good. Still Fraser then. Not some kind of sexy, evil, soap-opera twin. He looks back up at me and licks his lip. Then does it again, slowly.
I'm reconsidering the evil twin idea. Yeah. I think I'm in some serious trouble.
Very enjoyable :)
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From: mmmarmalade
Date: 10/22/2006 |
Oh, this was delicious. The visuals of Fraser in cashmere are just....exquisite. Thank you VERY kindly.
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From: A
Date: 02/20/2006 |
Well, you got me drooling. That's for sure! Guh, Fraser in cashmere.
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