The BLTS Archive - Bajo la Piel/Beneath The Skin by Briana L. Wright (chakotaytorres@yahoo.com) --- AUTHOR'S NOTES: Challenge response. Part II of "Desnuda." The title (pronounced ba-ho la pee-el) translates to 'beneath the skin.' Written in third-person perspective. --- Chakotay stepped across the threshold into the steaming shower. Under B'Elanna's intense gaze, he nearly felt self-conscious. Thankfully, a healthy dose of lust was helping to push insecurity aside. The contact of her wet hands to his body melted away any residual fear. The warmth of her touch calmed and excited him all at once. He closed his eyes at the sensation of her agile fingertips, delicately tracing invisible patterns across his chest. With his pulse racing and his heart pounding, he soon discovered her ministrations were too overwhelming to bear. He would be in her in less than a minute if she kept it up. He wanted to take his time with her, without distraction. Chakotay captured both of her hands with his own, stopping her from going any further. B'Elanna met his eyes with a silent question on her lips. He saw it there, but gave no answer as he released her and moved behind her. She could feel the rise and fall of his chest against her back. A chill of pleasure ran down her spine as his breath whispered against her ear lobe. She inhaled sharply. Their slick bodies touched, but still she wanted him closer. "Chakotay," she exhaled. He nuzzled the nape of her neck, reaching for her left hand. Their fingers interlaced and B'Elanna brought their joined hands to her hip. She felt for the other behind her, but all she found was a muscled thigh. He had other plans for his free hand. Like feathers, his fingertips graced the expanse of her abdomen down to her navel. Once there, her breath caught in her throat. A smile curled at his lips. Chakotay knew the erogenous zone well. With great care, he began to encircle her belly button with a single finger. Slowly, deliberately. B'Elanna gripped his hand tighter. The other clutched his thigh, her fingertips digging into the taut skin. Her breathing became more shallow as her desire rose. She attested to his own arousal as the stiff member rubbed up against her thigh. She moaned softly. Chakotay held fast to her hips, pressing them into his own. His hand made its way upward in further exploration of her body. He intentionally let his touch linger as he did so, further provoking erotic sensation. Soon B'Elanna felt her breast being massaged in his hand. Chakotay squeezed the supple flesh tenderly, careful not to bruise her. He moved in an outward, circular motion until he reached the tip, pinching it gently with his thumb and forefinger. He repeated the process before releasing her again. Torres blinked as want built in her chest, coursed down into the pit of her stomach and finally settled between her legs. A fog of lust cast over her eyes and for a moment, everything disappeared. Only Chakotay's voice brought her back from her reverie. "You are so beautiful, my love," he whispered into her ear, like a blessing. Unlike her previous lovers, Chakotay was selfless. One occasions such as these, his love elevated her as someone precious, something sacred. It took their lovemaking beyond physical gratification; it solidified their emotional connection. Flesh to flesh, soul to soul. Once again, she felt Chakotay's hand on her skin -- paused just at her hip. He waited for her response before going any further. But she grew anxious, her patience dwindling to nil. B'Elanna brought his left hand -- still entangled with hers -- to her mouth. She took his index finger and wrapped her tongue around the tip. Then she took the length of his brown finger between her teeth, grazing the skin as she withdrew it. She could feel his groin straining behind her. B'Elanna grinned with relish and flicked the tip of his finger with her tongue for good measure. That gave Chakotay all the encouragement he needed to proceed his course. His hand went to the outside of her thigh. He slid easily across the skin as he moved inward. There, he grasped the flesh of her inner thigh and squeezed tight. B'Elanna couldn't suppress the groan that escaped from her lips. His touch was becoming an exquisite torture. Chakotay alternated between rough and gentle caresses, each time inching closer to the dark apex. He only got close enough so that his fingers brushed against her damp curls. B'Elanna's hips shifted to capture those fingers. She longed for release. Chakotay's own self-control was withering. As her hips pressed harder into his, the greater the temptation to take her from behind became. It would have been so easy for him to spent himself inside her. But her touch reminded Chakotay of her need and he pushed his own aside. He felt her nails digging deeper into him, piercing the skin. She had to be ready. His hand finally dipped between her lower lips, testing his theory. Inside, his fingers probed her delicate folds, searching for the erect nub at her core. B'Elanna gasped as Chakotay's index finger found the tight bundle of nerves. She was wonderfully wet and swollen. Carefully, he began to stoke her most sensitive spot, steadying his pace to her responses. Soon her soft cries of pleasure became sweet music to his ears. Slow and steady, Chakotay's hips moved in rhythm with hers as she rocked against his hand. He placed a kiss on shoulder, then pushed her ecstasy even further by biting the same spot -- hard. B'Elanna's head fell back against his chest as specks of white burst in front of her eyes. Klingon mating customs were a regular feature of their foreplay. Even B'Elanna's human half delighted in the stinging sensation of pain blending in with her sexual euphoria. Chakotay sank his teeth into her again, taking the flesh between them and pulling. Her cries elevated as her orgasm built. It wasn't long before he brought her to her peak, and B'Elanna shuddered against him as she climaxed. Water from the shower head spattered onto her eyelids, falling down her face, onto her lips. She felt every drop as it met her skin. Never had she felt so liberated from such glorious tension. Every inch of her skin tingled with sensitivity, like she'd been reborn. Chakotay clung to her as she came down from bliss. Gradually, B'Elanna's heart rate returned to normal and she exhaled in easy breaths. Her lover's right arm came across her chest, bracing her against him. He held her there for a time, basking in the afterglow of their bonding. B'Elanna grinned, happily satiated. "This is why we don't shower together." Chakotay kissed the bite mark at her shoulder. The shower water combined with her sweat; he could taste the salt of her skin. "Mmm. Pity." "We'd never leave," B'Elanna said with a touch of sarcasm. "Speaking of which, don't you have bridge duty in less than an hour?" Chakotay released her and she turned to face him. He caressed her cheek as he met her full wet lips. When he withdrew, he found himself captivated by the dark pools of her irises. "Well, I certainly can't show up like this." Both pairs of eyes glanced down at his prominent erection. Torres brought her hands to his chest, then tilted her head slightly, placing kisses on the glistening skin. She paused just as she came to his heart, feeling it thump rapidly. "I can fix that," she purred. Chakotay's mouth descended on her neck, alternating between bites and kisses. Until B'Elanna stopped him abruptly. "Look at me," she commanded. He halted his pursuit and did as she asked. B'Elanna's hands came to his face, embracing him lovingly. Her eyes bore into his, her own expression flushed with searing passion. Soft lips pulled at his top one, taking it in for a taste. She paused, closing her eyes as she savored the delicacy that was his mouth. She moved onto his bottom lip, nibbling, until finally she brought his head down to hers, hands pulling at his short hair as their mouths fused together. Chakotay pushed her up against the shower wall roughly as water from the shower head streaming down them both in a steady flow. His restraint was gone. He lifted her to him, then thrust himself into her, hard and deep. B'Elanna clung to his body, overcome by his lust and her own. He drove himself onward as she clenched around him. "I love you..." he breathed. Her fingers clawed into his back, leaving streaks of red. "I love you." Her eyes fell close and she surrendered her soul to the rapture of his embrace. --- The End